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Now a days people are focus on keeping in good health,due to there are more and more illness.

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Modern lifestyle is linked to an increased number of illnesses. Therefore, people nowadays are more aware of the importance of healthy living and regular checkups.

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Since diseases of civilization become very common,
people are not only finding ways to keep in good health but also having health checkups periodically.

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