2006-12-25 10:59:59
請幫忙英文修改
可否幫忙修改一下
覺得寫的很不順,連接詞也不知要換什麼用了
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很高興於X`MAS 前收到您的來信,預祝您MERRY X`MAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR. 相信我們的JV明年業績將會大有展獲,我們必將奮力達成並成功地推動.您大可放心交給如此工作團隊
對於MONICA再次身體微羔感到難過,
原本以為她的身体已康復了, 在此獻上我的祝福
也祈求你的主/我的佛保佑她
您也要多加照顧身體,尤其在如此寒冷的天氣
I’m glad to hear from you days before Christmas. Wish you and Monica health and happiness for the Christmas season and the coming year. For the next year of the JV, I remain confident in the growth potential of its business. Our team will put the best effort to make significantly progress. You may place the confidence in us.
Regarding to Monica’s illness, I thought she was fine. I feel sad hearing this unfortunately new and would like to give her my sincere wishes. Also, in your religion, may God bless her; in our religion, may Buddha bless her. Also take care on you health, especially in this cold weather.
覺得寫的很不順,連接詞也不知要換什麼用了
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很高興於X`MAS 前收到您的來信,預祝您MERRY X`MAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR. 相信我們的JV明年業績將會大有展獲,我們必將奮力達成並成功地推動.您大可放心交給如此工作團隊
對於MONICA再次身體微羔感到難過,
原本以為她的身体已康復了, 在此獻上我的祝福
也祈求你的主/我的佛保佑她
您也要多加照顧身體,尤其在如此寒冷的天氣
I’m glad to hear from you days before Christmas. Wish you and Monica health and happiness for the Christmas season and the coming year. For the next year of the JV, I remain confident in the growth potential of its business. Our team will put the best effort to make significantly progress. You may place the confidence in us.
Regarding to Monica’s illness, I thought she was fine. I feel sad hearing this unfortunately new and would like to give her my sincere wishes. Also, in your religion, may God bless her; in our religion, may Buddha bless her. Also take care on you health, especially in this cold weather.
