急*求職英文自傳------麻煩請幫我看一下是否需要修改

My name is xxx-xxx xxx, and English name is xxx . I was born in 1985 in Taichung. There are 6 members in my family. I graduated from Overseas Chinese University(OCIT), and major in International Trade.

I used to work in Forwarder Company for 10 months, and being responsible to anything I do, I think it will do a great help on maintaining our customer.
The job has given me a good opportunity to hone I learned how to act in concert to deal with customers and strengthen my communication skills and understanding of the various customer needs, not only the work of its external relations, internal administration to implement..From the work I learned an awful lot of work ethics and practical experience. I put into practice what I have learned from those experiences and learned that teamwork was the most important thing, and learn more about International Trade flows.


I love to travel. Since I was little, I often travel with my family. It is can be open-minded people, also can widen my horizon. For 6 years ago, I have been to study in America for a month. Although time is short, but I was learn how to get along with people from different countries in the strange environment, also learn to more independent and improve my speaking skills.

 
我的文法不好,但已經很努力拼湊出來這份自傳了!!麻煩請幫我訂正有誤的地方,謝謝!