請問英文高手二題文法題~

1.Tony has been in the hospital for two weeks because he was having an accident when he was driving to his parents` house. 其中的was having可以改成為 had嗎?

2.Many teachers believe that progressive education has led to the neglect of the basic reading, writing, and arithmetic skills and thinking greater attention should be given to basic subjects.

這句的中文意思譯為"很多教師認為逐漸發展的教育導致忽視基礎學科諸如基本的閱讀、寫作、算術能力和~~~"這句and thinking 該怎麼改才好呢? or thinking 可以嗎?

另外,attention should be given那部份譯為"該注意~~"可以嗎?

THANKS FOR YOUR CORRECTION~
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