英文好的美女們幫幫我
我打算參加一個公益T-shirt的設計競賽
然後主辦單位是`財團法人羅慧夫盧言基金會之類的`
是給兔唇,天生顏面殘商的小朋友
我的標題很大同小異
我一開始是想說`` it`s your world, get to express your loves`
but my dad said it doesn`t make sense ( ha).
下面是我想到的
1.the love you hand could change the world
2.the love you hand could make their dream come ture
3.one way to get the most out of life is to share the love you have
4.caring is a new/ small step to make their dream come ture
5.the power of caring, which have the potential to make their dream come ture
我怎麼看都覺得文法怪怪的,而我文法又是最差的部分XP
請大家幫我看看,當然如果你們有更好的想法也希望可以提供出來
在這裡先謝謝啦
然後主辦單位是`財團法人羅慧夫盧言基金會之類的`
是給兔唇,天生顏面殘商的小朋友
我的標題很大同小異
我一開始是想說`` it`s your world, get to express your loves`
but my dad said it doesn`t make sense ( ha).
下面是我想到的
1.the love you hand could change the world
2.the love you hand could make their dream come ture
3.one way to get the most out of life is to share the love you have
4.caring is a new/ small step to make their dream come ture
5.the power of caring, which have the potential to make their dream come ture
我怎麼看都覺得文法怪怪的,而我文法又是最差的部分XP
請大家幫我看看,當然如果你們有更好的想法也希望可以提供出來
在這裡先謝謝啦